I have reviewed this document. The writing is acceptable and generally good. However, it lacks substance and vividness; it feels dry and uninspiring, which is a shortcoming. I urge you to produce, within the next few months, a work that has both structure and flesh, skin and hair—something substantive and well-argued. It must be logically coherent and supported by sound reasoning; otherwise, it will remain mere metaphysics. For over a decade, metaphysical thinking has been rampant, while few have truly engaged with materialist dialectics. The time has come to change course.