To Comrades ×××, ×××, and ××× of the Literary Gazette in Beijing:

I have only read a portion of it; since you are ready to publish it, go ahead. The editorial note is rather dull and lacks political substance. As literary figures, it also falls short in literary quality and fails to capture the readers’ attention. Although there has been some improvement in writing style recently, this particular note has yet to reflect that change. The title is far too long—“A Further Critique” would be sufficient. Please consider revising it accordingly. I am currently in the south and just received your letter now; tomorrow happens to be the deadline for going to press, so I am sending this brief note without delay.

Wishing you success!

Mao Zedong
Afternoon, January 19