No. 1 - Rework so as to produce a thesis of practical politics. Recognition of the maturity of the socialist revolution of the proletariat and the necessity of its immediate transformation into civil war, as a confirmation of the historical slogan.

No. 2 - Add: in the given war of 1914-1918.

Specially emphasize the "league of nations" and "social-pacifism" as a slogan of liberal deception.

No. 3 - Emphasize the "smashing" of the state machine... and dictatorship in contrast to the opportunists and the "center."

No. 4 - Preparation of revolution and armed insurrection. Conduct all propaganda and agitation in this spirit (expand).

No. 5 - Ultimatively (insert) à la Liebknecht.

No. 6 - Add: in view of the ubiquitous and typical (for imperialism) violations and restrictions of legality by the bourgeoisie.

No. 7 and 8 - Place alongside dictatorship.

No. 9 - Type of Commune and Soviets (not necessarily "Soviets").

No. 10 - Add: the right = class enemies center = vacillating petty bourgeoisie
+
Add:
Marxism has split into . and .
non-Marxists
+ the worthlessness of Zimmerwald and the necessity of consolidating the left.

No. 2 (bis)

Written in February 1919

Published for the first time, from the manuscript