[1913, not earlier than August]

P. 1 — 1st phrase

Develop Snowden's point of view from the point of view of opportunism.

The beginning of the rise (revolutionary) of English workers. Opportunists follow the liberals—they hold back.

P. 1. (before the 2nd phrase)

Add an evaluation of Larkin (in greater detail (from the words of C. Hardy himself one can restore Larkin approximately not by quotation, but by characterization).

And then. Even C. Hardy rose up (though softly)...

P. 3. before the end: in greater detail on syndicalism and opportunism, as mutually complementary stupidities and bourgeois deviations.

Conclusion: From the "Note" one must make an article with a beginning and an end, with a narration of the matter (for Russian workers), with hands and feet, with a conclusion.