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a — a should be reworked so that it comes out: general prophecies about the fall of autocracy were correct, but general, while here are the facts, the growth of the movement.
Otherwise there is some shade of meaning that they prophesied in vain, and this shade is very harmful).

p. 2. Insert a phrase like: "intensively preparing the proletariat for a possible and probable decisive struggle with autocracy in the near future, we do not push this most important task away from us for a single minute."

p. 4. b — b. Remove the reproaches against the Central Committee and the Organizing Committee.

p. 5, c. A note is mandatory that this infatuation with politics in individual cases was noted
even by the old Iskra
("No. 43 and No. 47 — cite in more detail)* and that it is absurd to link this infatuation (possible not according to theory, but only by mistake) with the majority and the minority. Of the 5 committees named on
p. 4 — 3 are majority and 1 is minority, 1 was both majority and minority.
Regarding the "infatuation
with politics" in general, it must be reworked so that the Mensheviks do not distort it!!!!

p. 6. (l.) and to p. 8. Class struggle is not only = political
economic struggle. The development of socialist propaganda, which is poorly developed among us, is also needed. This must be added.

Would it not be best to rework the entire article on the theme: "invented disagreements and real needs" or the like?